Do the dangers derived from the use of chemicals in food production and preservation outweigh the advantages?
Nowadays, most foods contain chemicals to improve production and perserve in a long time, which helps companies sell products more easily but it is the cause of cancer. Personally, using chemicals in food has more disadvantages than benefts.
The first benefit of using chemicals is to encourage many people purchase food. Because chemicals contained in food help products become fresher, so consumers will be attracted to buy it. Small stores and supermarkets can sell many more goods; this means that they will achieve higher turnover. Another benefit is to perserve food longer especially instant food. If not using preservative substances, instant food will damage easily, which causes heavy losses to companies.
However, chemicals detrimentally affect human health. The organs in a body are lessened. If a body contains the large amount of chemicals, which will cause diseases about heart, stomach and particularly cancers. That is a main reason to bring to the death of hundreds of people per year.
To concluded, although using chemicals brings some benefits to companies, it negatively influences to human health. I think that many people should stop using chemicals and produce organic products instead to ensure health of customers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 32.9175257732 27% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48453608247 4.54256449028 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74560393177 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639175257732 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0533865584 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8461538462 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253682791607 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937047995978 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698016459943 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154803803209 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077750427644 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.91 8.71597938144 160% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.