Essay topics: You have recently gone to live in a new city.
Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter:
• Explain why you have gone to live in the new city
• Describe the place where you are living
• Invite your friend to come and see you
Dear John,
I am writing to inform you that I have recently moved to Los Angeles.
As you know, I have always wanted to move from my home town to a megalopolis and now my dream finally came true. The thing is that I was transferred to a new office that has been recently opened in LA.
In the city I managed to find a decent flat near my workplace. Can you imagine? It is so close that I don’t need a car! The neighborhood is ok, although I would prefer to live closer to the shore but it is too expensive for me now.
Finally, if I remember correctly, and I do, you are going to travel to the USA this autumn. So, I hope that you will include LA in your plans. Remember you can stay in my place as long as you wish and by the time you arrive, I will have known the city pretty well and we will be having awesome time.
Hope on your prompt response.
Your friend,
Eugene.
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
No. of Words: 176 250 // need to write more content. for the first requirement:
'Explain why you have gone to live in the new city. '
which is not enough for one sentence:
As you know, I have always wanted to move from my home town to a megalopolis and now my dream finally came true.
revised:
As you know, I have always wanted to move from my home town to a megalopolis where there are more facilities, parks, restaurants...(and more...), and now my dream finally came true.
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It is not formal to write 'ok' in the essays:
The neighborhood is ok,
we may say:
The neighborhoods are friendly and easy going.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 176 250
No. of Characters: 670 1200
No. of Different Words: 117 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.642 4.7
Average Word Length: 3.807 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.142 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 36 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 20 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 12 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 6 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.538 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.689 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.462 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.348 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.718 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.195 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5
Users in average can develop
Users in average can develop 206 words for task I in general training essays. You don't have enough content means the content didn't cover all requirement. for example, in the first requirement:
'Explain why you have gone to live in the new city. '
there is only one sentence:
As you know, I have always wanted to move from my home town to a megalopolis and now my dream finally came true.
which is not enough.
so what we do to remove this issue in the future essays? this is the formula:
for every requirement, put two reasons like we did in the speaking.
• Explain why you have gone to live in the new city. first, reason 1, .....second....reason 2//one paragraph
• Describe the place where you are living. first, ....second.......//one paragraph
• Invite your friend to come and see you. first, ...second.......//one paragraph
we don't necessarily put the words first, .....second...., but we can organize the content better by this way with more content, and we will not lose something for the requirement.
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Try it out by this formula and let's see how is the performance.
Thank you I will do it, This
Thank you I will do it, This is an awesome idea!
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 724.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.13714285714 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27772890828 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.63414845 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.8181818182 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309236056944 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111685542747 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615990149472 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135026389721 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477477774045 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.44 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.