You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbour to come
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Keith Roy, your new neighbour. Me and my wife moved in last week along with our son. Sorry for not being able to introduce ourselfs' earlier.
We have arranged a small house warming party for our family and close friends on the 5th of this month. I would like to apologise in advance for any inconvience caused on the day of the party. We will be having approximately 25 guests, who will start coming from 8pm and leave by midnight.
Their would be music and games for their entertainment. This may result in some noise. In that case, please feel free to ring my bell at any given time if its causing disturbance to you and your family.
I would like to take this opportunity to invite you and your family to join us in our party for some snacks and drinks. So that, we can get to know each other and start a new friendship.
Looking forward to meeting you.
Yours sincerely,
Keith Roy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: IT_IS[7]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ee to ring my bell at any given time if its causing disturbance to you and your fam...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 758.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45882352941 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34657963559 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688235294118 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8704105661 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.3076923077 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0769230769 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.30769230769 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243323595462 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793046958142 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764227026973 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115757700285 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498573784772 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.7 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.