All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity, How could it be tackled?
In recent years, the number of individuals who have been struggling with obesity is gradually mounting. There are several reasons derived from this problem, namely food abuse mental therapy, and deficient management in their diet. In this essay, I will elucidate these explanations profoundly as well as give several solutions to tackle this obstacle.
To begin with, abusing food as a cognitive remedy can be considered as one of the reasonable reasons behind this phenomenon. In fact, numerous statistics of the younger and senior generation in America recently chose food to release their stress when they are overthinking or experiencing a lot of pressure in their daily life. This is leading to an upsurge in the number of adolescent and medium-aged individuals who are overweight in this country. Therefore, a considerable solution has been suggested for them to attempt to seek other therapies such as taking up exercise or finding outdoor activities to eliminate their stress rather than consuming food and then getting fat.
Equally important, the lack of serious management in people’s healthy diet can also result in obesity. Several individuals cannot curb their diet, for instance, they consume too much fast food, junk food, and processed food that intake a multitude of calories and hydrocarbon into their body. Additionally, they also do not take up intense workouts to remove excess energy from their bodies. As a consequence, they will continuously get out of shape and become overweight. To handle this, restraining a sedentary lifestyle can be a necessary solution for them. In lieu of staying indoors, they can go outside and take several actions to release the body’s power and energy. What’s more, they also have to go on a balanced diet, consume a lot of fresh fruits and vegetables, and control their aptitude when they see fast food or junk food.
To conclude, several explanations illustrate why the number of obese individuals is increasing. Nevertheless, to tackle this, controlling the diet scientifically, exercising, and not choosing food to relieve stress are considered effective solutions today. In the foreseeable future, the number of obesities can decrease as well as several diseases caused by it can also be eliminated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
... consuming food and then getting fat. Equally important, the lack of serious manageme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in fact, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1909.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30277777778 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95969712957 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3605130713 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.294117647 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1764705882 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157731755956 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587407935235 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543713565726 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120778887729 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595702236818 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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