The best way for a country to prepare for the future is to invest more resources in the young people. Do you agree or disagree?
Over the past decade, countries across the world have been planning for the years ahead. Some experts believe that the best method to get ready for the future is to disburse funds for youth education and health as it will provide financial growth. I am in complete agreement with this opinion for many reasons which I shall discuss in this essay.
Firstly, by allocating more revenues for the educational institutions, and directing resources towards the education of the young population, governments can ensure that the country will progress financially in the future. This is due to the fact that a young, literate workforce will be able to join and lead corporations, in turn, making them more productive. An illustration of this phenomenon can be seen by looking at the youth development program of the United States, which has shown promising results. Therefore, if nations want to secure their future financially, they will have to focus on the education of their adolescents.
To add further credence to my assertion, providing more funds for the health of the population under 30 years of age will make sure that future generations are healthy. This is because the sedentary lifestyle and poor diet of today’s teenagers are expected to cause an increase in lifestyle diseases such as hypertension, diabetes, and high cholesterol in the coming years. This can be prevented by giving more opportunities for sports and a well-balanced diet. For instance, in Australia, the obesity rates among students have been dropping over the past 10 years since athletic activities have been added to their curriculum. Hence, health is directly related to the country's economic growth and the authorities should give priority to this sector in order to plan for the future.
In conclusion, it is clear that countries need to plan for their future problems in order to make progress. I believe that the best approach towards this issue will be to focus and direct energies on the health and education of their younger people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, look, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09638554217 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80488163927 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560240963855 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2025092908 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.857142857 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226732865428 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862962040867 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598605495791 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153086807823 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323456855323 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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