Cars damage the environment and their use is increasing. Why? How can this be controlled
It is no doubt true that in the modern life nowadays, car is increasingly used by people for several reasons and has detrimental effects on environment. While I accept that it is impossible to address problem totally, people can have control over the issue with the potential solutions.
The increasing in car usage can be attributed to several factors. Firstly, the convenience and flexibility offered by cars play an importance role in their growing popularity. Car provides a door-to-door transportation solution, eliminating the need to adhere to fixed schedules or routes, which appeals to individuals seeking efficient and personalized travel. Moreover, economic factors contribute to increased car usage. As economies grow, more people can afford cars, resulting in a higher rate of car ownership. The perception of car as status symbols further incentivizes their purchase and use.
On the other hand, increasingly car usage brings numerous drawbacks to environment that needs a combination of efforts to control. Government should encourage citizens to purchase electrical cars which use renewable energy source. Using zero-emission vehicles not only bring beneficial impacts to atmosphere but also prevent our surroundings from deteriorating, for example fual energy depletion. Many reseach studies have shown that with the speed of using fossil fuel in recent years, people tend to be faced with the lack of this energy in the future. In addition, government should either promote carpooling and ride-sharing services to reduce the number of car trips, leading to less emission are released into the atmosphere or educate and inform people about the danger of cars to environment, making such solutions more possible.
In conclusion, the increasing use of cars and its adverse environmental effects are complex issue. Controlling this problem effectively requires a lot of efforts from both government and individuals behaviors.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 603, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er incentivizes their purchase and use. On the other hand, increasingly car usag...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h government and individuals behaviors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59322033898 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08658168499 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640677966102 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0960462716 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337249148018 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113483927755 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594680287619 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193627684234 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410378643162 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 603, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er incentivizes their purchase and use. On the other hand, increasingly car usag...
^^^
Line 4, column 211, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h government and individuals behaviors.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59322033898 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08658168499 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640677966102 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0960462716 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337249148018 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113483927755 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594680287619 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193627684234 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410378643162 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.