Demand for food is increasing worldwide. What are the causes of this? What measures can
the international community take to make sure the supply of food is enough?
These days, food demand is increasing all over the word. In this essay, I will explain the reasons and recommend some solutions to these problems.
To begin with, this main problem can be attributed to a number of factors. Firstly, the main factor behind this phenomenon is the increase in population. As a result of overpopulation, there is a lack of food for individuals and not enough food available to sustain their lives and health. For instance, there are many people in some African countries, resulting in poor quality and economic shortages due to a large number of citizens. Secondly, people change their eating habits. With the development of life, citizens can choose their favorite foods and select fresh food. According to a recent survey, many people have a choice for food which is healthy for them and avoid unknown origin food.
On top of that, there are also some solutions to tackle this phenomenon. By offering effective policies, the government can control the growth of the population. Every family in the world should have at least one or two kids in their home. It's just enough. Not only the population can have the benefits but also the child still has their parental affection and care. Additionally, some manufacturers have to select and handle foods. This is because people are afraid to buy unhealthy food. When food producers can balance foods brought to the market, it can reduce the big amount of odds and ends.
To sum up, population growth and changing food habits are the main reasons. However, people also deal with problems by implementing population policies and handling foods brought to the market.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: ALL_OVER_THE_WORD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'all over the world' (=globally)?
Suggestion: all over the world
These days, food demand is increasing all over the word. In this essay, I will explain the reas...
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Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...r quality and economic shortages due to a large number of citizens. Secondly, people change their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, at least, for instance, in fact, as a result, to begin with, to sum up, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99636363636 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61352110418 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585454545455 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3859894286 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3157894737 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4736842105 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15789473684 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264233102598 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081323436113 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648943075805 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155027462941 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531333526733 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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