Many animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in sea. What are the reasons and solutions to solve this issue?
Nowadays, it is becoming tranding that many animal species are becoming extinct because human activities on land and in sea. In this essay, I would explain first the reason that hard to find in the real habitat. Second how to tackle this issue in the end, how to solve this problem will be explain below.
Firstly, many people hunt animal for food or to make something unique from part of animal body. It is because, some animals have body part that are worth selling high. For example Sumatera tiger, because thr skin of tiger could be accessories which have high value like bag, wallet, belt and many other. As result, status of the Sumatera tiger is almost gone. It is clear that, illegal hunting can drive a species becoming extinct.
Secondly, a lot of people destroying habitat with various ways as deforest, migration, bombing the sea. It is due to swift growth in human, so need space for living and using bom to get more quarry. Taken as an example deforest for build house estate, woodworking furniture. Therefore, habitat destruction is very detrimental to animal inside so they lost their habitat.
It is clear that, government must make it a strict rule for protecting animals from extinction. In other side, all of people must must be aware to protect the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun other seems to be countable; consider using: 'many others'.
Suggestion: many others
...e high value like bag, wallet, belt and many other. As result, status of the Sumatera tige...
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Line 7, column 126, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: must
...xtinction. In other side, all of people must must be aware to protect the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84615384615 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40702717395 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.4510365986 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.5 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7857142857 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296367833408 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874825672887 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121918343244 0.0667982634062 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162342443873 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158292079605 0.056905535591 278% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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