nowadays, more and more older people who need employment compete with the younger people for the same job. what problems this causes? what are the solutions?
Finding the appropriate job is one of the most important issues for all people of different age groups. In this regard, younger and older people are competitors to fill vacancy positions. In this essay, the problems of this subject have been evaluated and finally, a solution is presented.
On the one hand, the younger people want to start their first job and need to emerge into workplaces to get familiar with new situations, learn more, and acquire experience. Indeed, they are excited and motivated due to being young. In front of them are highly accomplished older persons that are more convincing for some employers. In the other words, lack of experience will lead to some trouble to find jobs for younger and can deteriorate their huge desire for a career future. For instance, managers in big companies with a lot of projects and risks prefer to utilize proficient people to diminish probable repercussions.
on the other hand, younger people have a critical advantage in that they usually have lower expectations in comparison with skillful persons. Moreover, the physical ability and high passion of young people will be considered in a lot of positions and can be effected the result of competition. for example, a lot of job advertisements like security guards, firefighters, police officers and so on refer to maximum acceptable ages which are usually lower than 30.
It seems one of the best solutions is using older people, simultaneously with younger to have the benefits of both required factors, experience, and motivation.
- Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones in communication has negative effects on young peoples reading and writing skills To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- the bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- advantages and disadvantages of the use of organic foods 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...le to diminish probable repercussions. on the other hand, younger people have a c...
^^
Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
... be effected the result of competition. for example, a lot of job advertisements li...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11462450593 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88440613962 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596837944664 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4952070317 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.833333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315350092893 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106570627392 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560337484697 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177785157918 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07204858301 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.