In the present era, children are found to have fewer responsibilities than it used to be in the past time. Some people consider it as positive development, however, some other people believe it to be a negative trend. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion
Nowadays, children have much burden for their studies, different activates etc. thus, they do not have much responsibilities such as responsibility of parents, grandparents. Some people say that it is positive development as; children have to think about future, develop hobbies while other thinks that this is negative development because one can forget about family, socialization etc. I would like to give my opinion in conclusion.
On one hand, with the increase in competition, children have to give more time for study, extra activates to stay in competition. One more reason is that, children are multitalented. Some people think it is positive development because young one has to take step with world; little one has to gain more knowledge for all kinds of field. Furthermore, if children so not have other responsibilities so, they can focus on their studies because study is more important to build career. Not only focus on study but also youngsters can give more focus on extra curriculum activities as, their hobby. Another reason is that, life is too short so, little one live their life freely as, childhood is the most important part of life.
On the other hand, other group of people thinks that this is negative trend as, children are becoming more self-centered. Moreover, in the future, one should not understand about the parent’s responsibility thus, it is possible that in older age parents could have to stay in old age home. In addition, it is the responsibility of youngsters to give. As a result, we can see nuclear families in our society. Also, sometime it is possible that, individual could not learn the socialization because of the self-centered behavior.
To conclude that, from my point of view, it is positive development however, no one can neglect the negative trend thus, this is duty of parents to teach children about responsibilities but in limit.
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- The number of old people is increasing in many countries Some people think this causes problems whilst other people think that old people have an important role to play How far do you agree or dis agree 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...t activates etc. thus, they do not have much responsibilities such as responsibility...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09324758842 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0247101508 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488745980707 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5409789341 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210764970891 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718974591088 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596351823584 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145447248678 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406775643291 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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