Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Others believe that it is getting easier. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that some individuals think that population is more likely to struggle to settle in mega cities in the future. While some people believe that it is increasingly effortless to reside in towns that is crowded, I firmly argue that it is no longer easy to live in big cities.
On the one hand, there are primary reasons that people believe that it is getting easier to live in mega cities. Firstly, the urbanization is increasingly widespread over all the world. To be specific, the urbanization is one of reasons that leads to the development of local companies that created numerous opportunities for not only local residents, but also migrants from rural areas. In additional, the swift increase of foreign investments into urban areas due to investing attractive policies drawn the improvement of living conditions that is foundation of a prolonged stable residence. For example, there is more tax that enterprises pay to government is financial funds to renovate the infrastructure in order to improve living qualities for dwellers.
On the other hand, I strongly believe that settling in mega cities is gradually more harsh. The first reason is excessive immigration form areas that is below poverty line to cities that is more progressed. This gives rise to concerns about accommodations that there is insufficient conditions to settle with slums as a apparent clue. The second reason is the increasing of crimes that is a inevitable part of quick urbanization. To be specific, surveys have shown that some people who live in mega cities are more likely to commit a crime rather than those who dwell in rural areas.
In conclusion, although some people claim that they are prone to dwell in mega cities because it is more increasingly effortless, I strongly believe that it is becoming harsher for residence in big cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'there are insufficient conditions'?
Suggestion: there are insufficient conditions
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 21.0 7.30460921844 287% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06557377049 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91062607609 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514754098361 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3893887172 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.846153846 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276493760326 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097486678987 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881456701707 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182911913053 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449597100327 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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