Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this day and age, there is a controversy whether history brings us value in this day or not. In my point of view, I agree that it is difficult to learn something from history, however, if we consider the past more elaborately, there are many things we still can obtain from it.
On the one hand, the world has been changing and transforming immediately, so there is an enormous difference between the modern world and the ancient world that makes it troublesome for people to learn and apply value from the past. Firstly, the changes in humanity are a part contributing to this transformation. People in this modernized world have had new mindsets and lifestyles so the old-fashioned stories, which contain old mentalities and situations, are not suitable for people in this era. Secondly, the civilization and ethic of the human race have seen a transition to become more civilized. Hence, in one circumstance, in terms of ethics, the story in the past is wrong while it is right in the present.
On the other hand, people still can attain some lessons from the past if they have a subtle approach and know when we can apply it. Reading and thinking elaborately is a primary key to see the underlying meaning of the stories in history. Because of the difference between the past and the present, people need to read and think about the stories in the past in a more abstract way rather than a simple way. Besides, subtlety is needed to totally comprehend the nature of the stories and learn how to use what we learn in order to apply it to life. For instance, people cannot use the lesson learned from history carelessly just because of the resemblance between the one in the past and the one in the present.
In conclusion, learning from the past is hard and complicated. Nevertheless, people still can do it if they enrich their knowledge as well as approach history in a more subtle way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68358208955 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72327492755 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498507462687 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5331231756 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.071428571 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7142857143 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223568762971 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755707743936 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048446084965 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131982979105 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352387482562 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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