Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no shortage of opinion that food is an essential thing and a vital part of our daily lives to give us nutritional support. Nowadays, preparing food at home is preferred by a lot of humans. Contrary to this popular belief, some of them support consuming meals in restaurants. But, I concur with those who are inclined to eat meals at home.
Firstly, eating in restaurants is more expensive rather than cocking at home. Because eating at restaurant frequently would cost a huge amount of money and that would be pretty tough for low-salary earners; for the same amount, any employee can buy several products and ingredients that can be used for a whole month. Any person should pay in restaurants minimum charge at least. Take for example, in Egypt any decent place or any brand has a door policy that you should expect a 300/350 LE average cheque per person for lunch and 500/600 for dinner such as food brand called "ayadina". We are confident that the food is cooked by ladies at home is hygienic. However, we are unsure about the quality of the ingredients used in the restaurant and its hygienic state. For example, you can frequently encounter certain terrible items in fast food places, such as hair or nails, so ladies can control on quality control at home.
Furthermore, Cooking is also a popular stress-relieving hobby for many people. Family members can assist one another in everyday cooking, allowing them to spend quality time together and teaching children some moral things. In addition to, food at home is always healthy. In contrast, Restaurant Food is often fried and hence lots of calories, cholesterol, unsaturated fat which can lead to obesity, diabetes or heart attack.
In a nutshell, a home cooked meal is not only healthy but also hygienic and delicious too. Although, anyone can try fried food or junk food in any cheat day per week. Parents should encourage their children to eat at home and to make it habit
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, so, at least, for example, in addition, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86268656716 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71422906729 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602985074627 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3533527242 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6111111111 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294470647677 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101813295485 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793574316872 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178858317178 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569553553178 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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