Some people think that developing countries need financial help from international organizations. Others think that it is practical aid and advice that is needed. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People's opinions differ as to whether or not international organizations should provide funding for developing countries. While I accepted that it would be significantly beneficial for these countries to receive financial support, I also believe realistic assistance would bring several merits for people.
On the one hand, financial support from international organizations could give developing government a funding that allow them to boost that nation's economy, especially their industries. For almost emergent nations, this source of money is vitally crucial in order to allocate money for public services and health care facilities for the important improvement to the netizens' life standards, which there are not any advices or assistances could do. Vietnam perfectly exemplifies this situation. Since 2000, Vietnam has received thousands million USD from a range of global organizations, such as NGO or International Business, which was finally invested not only in the construction of transport system and health care facilities, but also the industrialization in many provinces. As a result, in this day and age, Vietnam step-by-step has become one of thriving country in Asia.
On the other hand, providing funding for some society aspects may not always be efficient. Some economically developing countries do not have enough technology together with resources ability to be able them to conduct the economic improvement without practical help and advice from other nations or international organizations. For instance, it is not uncommon to hear about the new vaccine or health care facilities technology transfer project from USA or China for Vietnam in the last 10 years. While providing financial help could bring timely support, realistic aid and advice also give them many profits to obtain a sustainable development
In conclusion, I believe with both support from finance and practical help, developing countries could achieve a successful improvement in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: WHETHER[4]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; whether or not; as to whether
Peoples opinions differ as to whether or not international organizations should prov...
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Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...a funding that allow them to boost that nations economy, especially their industries. F...
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Line 3, column 368, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'netizens'' or 'netizen's'?
Suggestion: netizens'; netizen's
...es for the important improvement to the netizens life standards, which there are not any...
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Line 3, column 539, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...ce 2000, Vietnam has received thousands million USD from a range of global organization...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, so, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67224080268 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13547603112 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585284280936 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.0121917159 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.181818182 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22281386482 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843125108008 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767444549888 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14746456941 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044308291852 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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