Some people think that if a police officer carries guns, it can encourage a higher level of violence. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Nowadays, crime is increasing day by day due to exploitation of population. So, it is asserted by few individuals that carring guns by policeman can lead to surge in violence. I am totally disagree with said notion and this essay will shed light on my views in sbsequent paragraphs.
It is essential to police hand over a pistol to protect themselves and public from offenders in critical situations. To epitome, some criticals such as serial killers can become a serios threat for society and they can harm anybody. So, in case, police officer have right to shoot them on site to save public, but if cop would not carrying a revolver, then they will lost their life due to killed by offenders. Hence, police can defend people from cirminals by aid of guns.
Moreover, cop not only can protect themselves and masses from lawbreakers because of carry a pistol, but also they can fill fear in the mind of jailbird. To explicate, whenever a police officer can carry a gun in public and he or she have right to execute offender in critical situations to save public, then lawbreakers will feel fear of poilce force. Thus, the criminal activities would be controlled by police with the assistance of wepons.
To conclude, although police can defend society from criminals with the aid of guns, police force must be trained to differenciate between innocent and culprit people before decide to shoot them and usage of guns should be allowed to special forces.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, then, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.852 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64075443766 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5401512573 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.272727273 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202781982263 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744330746489 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413591763465 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119703482291 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366183188215 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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