Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest of our lives, while others believe that adult life brings more happiness.
Certain people believe that the teenage is filled with more happiness, while others argue that people have the most delightful days during their
adulthood. This essay discusses both the views in detail and concludes that teenagers are the happiest individuals as they are surrounded by peer groups.
To begin with, various reasons are there for adults to be exhilarated. Mostly during adulthood, people seek good jobs and get married, which bring happiness for them. Likewise, their responsibilities in family, career and money, also become doubled. They often create stress and fear, instead of happiness. For example, American Psychological Association reports that 75 percentage of grownups are stressed up with their future duties.
On the other hand, teenage is the period when people enjoy to the fullest in their lives. During adolescence, majority of people study at schools, where they can be joyful with their friends without having definite responsibilities.
Though they have some educational roles, they converse with their friends and have maximum fun. For instance, a recent Russian study declared that the happiest population of the world is teenagers.
In conclusion, according to some, teenage years are the most joyful days in life. However, others think that happiness arrives after reaching adulthood. youngsters feel happy for the important events like job and marriage, with some stressfull duties. But, adolescence is the period when people experience the best and happiest days without any responsibilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59401709402 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80888889409 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632478632479 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4625289733 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.2666666667 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265675453971 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817564925709 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721833700725 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131850986093 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867540399836 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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