What are the possible effects of living long on an individual and on the whole society?
It is undoubtedly true that nowadays people are living longer due to the medical advances and high quality of life. I'm many countries, especially the developed one, senior citizen is taking a large part of the part of the population. Consequently, this tendency is resulted in many effects that not only on the elderly themselves but also on the whole society
One the one hand, the aged is allegedly living dependently on their descendants. It would seem that health condition and the financial capacity will not allow the elderly to live on their own. Naturally, the old people may feel burdened and weary as they cannot earn for living. By way of illustration, the senior citizens are having a tendency to move in nursing homes instead of living with their offsprings in last few decades. Secondly, many oldies are too weak to live without medical equipment. There appears some evidence that supported gear has became a part of their body. Pacemaker, hearing aid or wheelchair, to mention but a few. Moreover, many elderlies are reportedly addicted to function foods which only cure their imaginary illness
Beside the issues to the individual, there is also a variety of impact the longevity booming brings. First of all, the increase in life expectancy put a immense pressure on the community welfare. It is every likelihood that health center and other kind of organization caring for the old is emerged rapidly.Nursing village, which is a fresh and outstanding model of nursing home, is a good case in point. It is probably provided many occupation and there are also numerous of new jobs associating with this tendency were borned. In the second place, increasing in life expectancy slowing down the economy. It may in the case that the elderlies are seemingly causing a great loss of labour for the reason that they are no long able to work. Furthermore, in view of economic science, the governments need to spent a great part of state budget on community welfare to take after the lonely old people
To sum up, the longevity raising is resulted in living dependently on children and medical equipments. Moreover, they constrainted the economy through losing of labour and state budget. Nevertheless, the longevity booming created lots of careers in health centers and nursing homes
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ical advances and high quality of life. Im many countries, especially the develope...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...s some evidence that supported gear has became a part of their body. Pacemaker, hearin...
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Line 9, column 152, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ll, the increase in life expectancy put a immense pressure on the community welfa...
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Line 9, column 308, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Nursing
...n caring for the old is emerged rapidly.Nursing village, which is a fresh and outstandi...
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Line 9, column 430, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun occupation seems to be countable; consider using: 'many occupations'.
Suggestion: many occupations
... case in point. It is probably provided many occupation and there are also numerous of new jobs...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, kind of, first of all, on the whole, to sum up, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03926701571 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77185576778 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552356020942 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5972607373 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.944444444 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27777777778 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.092942715941 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0249928072669 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410254195583 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0583569489078 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407090162055 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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