The world's natural resources such as oil, forests, and fresh water are being consumed at an alarming rate. What problems does it cause? How can we solve these problems?
The consumption of natural resources is inexorably increasing, which has emerged as a topic of interest. This essay will demonstrate a host of effects that can be caused and a number of viable solutions to combat this issue.
Because of the reliance on machines, people consume a huge amount of natural resources every day. In the long run, the fact that those resources will run out could be speculated, which definitely causes a threat among people. Humans demand oil, trees, and fresh water not only on a daily basis but also in many other aspects of life, such as industry or agriculture. For example, we all need water for drinking, cooking, or bathing every day. And, watering is also one of the foremost factors attribute to the growth of farming. Those resources affect the whole ecosystem as they maintain the survival of all species on earth. Consequently, our overuse of natural resources may lead to a catastrophic or even deadly cause.
Several feasible solutions can be implemented to remedy the aforementioned issue. Using other energy as a substitute should be taken into consideration. For instance, nuclear energy has been used to power several buildings in America. In this way, people can reduce the usage rate as we could reserve those natural resources. In addition, the government should enforce regulations on the usage of resources of factories and raise awareness among people because tackling this problem requires individual responsibility.
In conclusion, this issue has a number of negative implications for not only humans but also animals and plants. It is imperative that the proposed solutions should be universally adopted to help address this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... requires individual responsibility. In conclusion, this issue has a number of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20879120879 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89345758008 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586080586081 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2989882691 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223834245461 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661349466869 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351411770026 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118887923382 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039656824441 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.