Advertisements are influencing us in a negative way. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Advertising is a tool which is used by organizations to promote their products in the market, and now it becomes a part of our lives. Some people believe that advertisements have a negative impact on consumers where others argue it helps to identify the best product. I strongly agree with the statement that advertisements have a negative influence on people.
Firstly, the main purpose of the advertisement is to convince the target population to buy the products by mentioning the features or specifications of it. However, nowadays advertisements are used to create unnecessary needs. For example, advertisements create a mindset of housewives that having a vegetable chopper helps them to reduce cooking time. Though, there is no much time difference in cutting vegetable using chopper and knife.
Secondly, low-quality products can be promoted as good products by advertisements. When companies use big cinema stars and models in their advertisements, people tend to buy those products as they see them as role models. For instance, when actress Asin plays the fair and lovely advertisement, many young girls buy it because of the expectation to become like Asin. However, a lot of women are using it for ages and no changes they have experienced.
In addition to the above, it creates a negative impact on younger generations. For example, fairness cream advertisements create an impact on youngsters that being fair is the only way to look beautiful, and it induces them to bully darker skin people.
The above essay discussed the reasons how advertisements can negatively impact people. Creating unnecessary needs, promoting low-quality products and change the attitude of youngsters are the main impacts of bad advertising. To conclude, I strongly agree that advertisements are influencing people in a negative way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s and no changes they have experienced. In addition to the above, it creates a n...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...t advertisements are influencing people in a negative way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36678200692 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23433362868 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56401384083 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4123283919 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9375 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163822255925 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709176992146 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988574243048 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108504611651 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779764903068 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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