Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective.
The growing level of criminality becomes an important global issue, spreading across different ages, including adolescence, and, thus, making humans' wealth and lives more vulnerable. This could have different roots and numerous variable solutions as well, some of which will be discussed in this essay.
One of the key possible reasons could be the rising cost of post-graduate education, which makes it unaffordable for a growing number of young people. Scarce education negatively influences the income of a person, while the lack of money often becomes the key motivation for wrongdoing. Another factor might be the negative influence of TV and other sources of information, where there is a lot of violence presented. This is especially sensitive for the youth, as, during the period of hormonal and mental maturation, teenagers could be easily affected by this kind of information or wrong role modeling.
Possible remedies to the problem could be considering the programs which would make higher education more affordable. This would engage more juveniles to an education process, would grow the potential for success in a future career, and also might raise the cultural level of a person. Another method to address the issue worth considering is stretching the age limits for the violence content online and on TV. This would help to shield unmatured minds from objectionable role modeling.
To summarize, the low education level due to its high cost and consequent low income and cultural level might be the reasons for growing numbers of violations around the globe. A complex respond from governments and influencers might avert this situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, well, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33969465649 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81758248338 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599236641221 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7773787935 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.583333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18164762165 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689161304323 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569709733403 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10677303789 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374457283432 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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