‘Failure is proof that the desire wasn’t strong enough’ To what extent do you agree with this statement?
If you study the lives of successful people throughout the history of mankind, whether those were kings, scientists, great artists or businessmen, you will find one thing is common, that is, a strong will power to get things done despite any hurdle. I strongly believe that if one truly aspires for something and doesn't get it, one lacks the required want to succeed. This essay highlights how people faced various obstacles and still succeeded due to strong will power.
I often come across people blaming their circumtances like poor family or not enough education to not able to achieve. On the contrary, there are so many role models who have the rags to riches stories only because their aspirations were much larger than their problems. Consider the top football player Ronaldo who is a live example of someone being poor and then rising to the glory. Another relatively known examples are of so many college drop-outs or people who never went to college but were super successful in their life. The famous scientist Einstein never went to school, in fact his teacher said he is unfit for school education; so many business tycoons have not completed their education and yet they never failed because they had a strong will to succeed.
Notwithstanding the above salient argument, some people may further argue that one might just be unlucky and therefore, not succeed. In my opinion, God helps those who help themselves. If you believe in your dreams and the desire to achieve them is strong enough, fortune comes your way. Take the case of J.K. Rowling - the famous author of the Harry Potter series; she was rejected so many times and yet she never gave up. Had she left it to her bad luck for not being able to achieve, she would have never been so inspiringly successful. People overcome not only their bad luck and all the obstacles possible if they have that burning need to succeed. While this resonates well, some may say that age is a driver to fail. However, one of the most famous fastfood joints in the world was started by someone in late 50s because he had the strong will to be successful.
All in all, the essay highlights that when there is a will, there is a way. Unsuccsessful people should blame on nothing but their lack of will for not being able to achieve something.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 314, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... if one truly aspires for something and doesnt get it, one lacks the required want to ...
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Line 3, column 431, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun college seems to be countable; consider using: 'many colleges'.
Suggestion: many colleges
...her relatively known examples are of so many college drop-outs or people who never went to c...
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Line 5, column 765, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...However, one of the most famous fastfood joints in the world was started by someo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, in fact, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73631840796 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40731879161 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554726368159 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7706904494 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.777777778 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0782550764588 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0266960338445 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411393249769 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0462735990096 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371640527674 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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