Many parents put a lot of pressure on their children to succeed. To what extent do you agree?
Increased competition and lack of job opportunities in every field has put pressure on children as they are being forced by their parents to conquer. Th question that has always so to answer is, what exactly the benefits associated with it and harmful consequence it may bring? The essay will highlight how worse it can be proved.
Several reasons are there to support my stance not to stress learners to achieve their goals. The prominent one is a psychological health. Would anyone be succeed with the stressful mind and parents pressure? Of course not, youth faces even more trouble in study when they have to satisfy their parents desire to get More grades. Even sometimes the instances of plagiarising others work and cheating are observed Because children don’t want to disappoint the parents. In such cases, rather than achieving the goals juveniles follow though wrong Path that would jeopardise their career. Thus, Parents should focus to motivate them so that children would not feel any burden of studies.
Other contributing factor is Learning from failure. I personally believe that what a person can learn after receiving victory can never be acquainted after victory. Precisely, Youngsters are being prepared to win and imported lessons not to get defeated bu anyone, which in turn, occupies their mind to satisfy their ego by winning the game or achieving the goals that are being said by their parents. Most importantly, they set away from choosing the films of their interest.
Conclusively, parents must make massive pressure on the growth of children and prioritise working hard rather than stressing them to attain success by hook and crook. There is need to make children understand that failure is Add certain as night and Day that cannot be stopped. They have to put failure aside and move ahead.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...by their parents to conquer. Th question that has always so to answer is, what ex...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'added'.
Suggestion: Added
...ake children understand that failure is Add certain as night and Day that cannot be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, so, thus, even so, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08637873754 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55786769924 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624584717608 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.6897529417 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0588235294 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7058823529 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23529411765 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218329476255 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615067866043 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054532154193 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12842358615 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307104266768 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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