Many people like to wear fashionable clothes.
Why do you think this is the case?
Is this a good thing or a bad thing?
There is no deny that clothes are integral part of our personality. In recent years there is upward trends by the members of the public to go for highly branded clothes. In my viewpoint wearing such kind of dresses is acceptable but up to a certain extent and will put forward my views when it could have negative impact.
Individuals choose to wear fashionable apparels for multifarious reasons. Someone who is wearing in media and film industry has to always be in limelight needs to be highly stylized. In other words, they need to look glamorous in public space as a part and parcel of their industry demands. However, general public who follow such celebrities should not always go for the fashionable clothes in day to day life and need to wear them only at special events.
On the other hand, anyone does not need to buy such wearable only for impressing others. If in case, people are doing this for getting others attention and not because it is part of their personality then they are validating self-worth with on exterior gratification which is unhealthy and shows a sign of under confidence. Additionally, individuals would be making an awful decision if they are buying such expensive clothes when they cannot afford them.
To sum it up, it is wonderful to wear latest trendy clothes but certain points need to be taken care of. In my opinion, instead of blindly going for such apparels any individual should go reasonable but good clothes and wear costly dresses only at specific big occasions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...cel of their industry demands. However, general public who follow such celebrities should not ...
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Line 13, column 34, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'wear the latest'.
Suggestion: wear the latest
.... To sum it up, it is wonderful to wear latest trendy clothes but certain points need ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, then, as to, kind of, in my opinion, in my view, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86538461538 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64443985187 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592307692308 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.587751157 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.416666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0975416505915 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349585738166 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036130229892 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0566655374778 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0137441576266 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.