Some people think that human history has been a journey from igonrance to knowledge. Others argue that this underestimates the achievements of ancient cultures, and overvalues our achievements.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Human history means existence of humans in the world from fossil age or stone age.
It is believed that humans came to existence from Apes. They unhibited traits and other qualities from Apes. With change in revolution and passage of time humans started to learn, adapt techniques which enabled them to perform daily activities.
Let us review hoe human history has been a journey from ignorance to knowledge.
During the initial period humans were trying to learn every single thing by imitating the Apes like walking, talking, eating, dressing. So initially all the activities were carried out by trying to copy and art. Since humans have brain they started to use it and make productive use which enable them a better facilities and standard of life started improving. Since in the initial period humans wire staying in huge dense forest they started using the trees, leafs for creating basic utility products which would help in day to day activities. Then they started building huts and started staying in those.
Achievements of ancient culture. During the ancient culture the teaching and learning used to happen in gurukul where the pupils learn, practice sholaks, mantras, sanskrit. Once the pupil completes the training in gurukul they are supposed to practice and educate other group as a part of their learning mechanism this type of learning created a sense of responsibility and inbibed values and culture and contributed significantly in overall development and growth of humans.
In conclusion, after reviewing both the aspects, I feel the ancient culture has deeply impacted and created a larger benefit which has moulded the human and created a better place to live along with the great values and culture which has frimed a strong foundation for mankind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19031141869 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51415456335 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.3668825192 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.142857143 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133651094468 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590594146898 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590210633808 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919421226077 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614426469693 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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