Some people think that men are naturally more competitive than women To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Some people think that men are naturally more competitive than women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a controversial perspective heating a debate over the natural character of males and females. While some people claim that men are more aggressive than women to some extent, I personally consider myself an opponent to this notion. This essay is devoted to analyzing the underlying roots of this perception, followed by some reasonable ideas.

It is understandable to note that males are likely more competitive than women. Obviously, they were born with muscle, and their physical, as well as their mental health, is always strong. That is the reason why an overwhelming majority of men are constituted for jobs that require intensive strength such as leadership. Throughout world history, it is irrefutable that most rulers and top management positions bias men. Donald Trump, who was a former prime minister in the US, has successfully defeated his rival, Hilary Clinton in the conquest of the US president’s seat since the dwellers believed that only male rulers can control a whole system of one nation. For those reasons, it is comprehensible if men are more preferred in many fields than females.

While the redeeming features of men are widely acknowledged, it is unfair if those of women are being overlooked. Despite the fact that women are considered to be naturally soft in every aspect, that thinking is now obsolete in modern society. Since we are living in a gender equality civilization, many women have participated themself in competitions that involve the power of mentality and physicality, and successfully prove that women are not less competitive than their counterparts. Angela Merkel can be cited as a viable instance since she has ruled Germany for many years as a president, based on her straightforward personality and her professionalism.

In conclusion, I am well convinced that though males are physically fit rather than women, it is essential to eliminate gender-based discrimination since both of them deserve recognition.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29299363057 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15401767561 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624203821656 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.484295208 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.714285714 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268175753164 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088074937187 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874209796874 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145276279169 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615340693314 0.056905535591 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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