Some people say that men are naturally more competitive than women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Discussions about the capabilities and strengths between opposite genders are always debatable. While the perception of many people in this contemporary world is set to believe that the male gender is stronger and competitive than the female, others disagree with this opinion. I firmly agree with the former opinion and provide necessary examples to back up my view in the forthcoming paragraphs.
The very strong and proven reason for people, including me, to believe that men are stronger is their genetically adapted physical and mental strengths. To be more precise, if we closely observe physiological and psychological stamina are the utmost important traits for an individual to work for longer durations in pressurised situations. The majority of the top management positions across the enterprise organisations are occupied by them, for instance, Satya Nadella, Mark Zuckerberg, Elon Musk to name a few. It needs a great amount of energy and time allocation to achieve success, which is basically lacking in women.
On the other hand, the secondary reason to strengthen my opinion is their soft nature, and I believe that women are family-oriented and more strong in the upbringing of children to produce more productive and creative youth for future generations. While I agree that women should equally participate in all activities, I personally feel that both genders have to take different responsibilities of a family to bring a balance in society. It is a proven fact as per the statistics of the world, for example, 78% of the top positions across industries and sports verticals are male-dominated, which indirectly resembles the competitive nature of gentlemen over ladies.
In conclusion, the majority of society believes that men are stronger than women by birth, while the other part of the community differs from this view. I strongly agree with the former notion, as it is genetically proven and agreed by the world because the physical and mental fitness of the male gender is stronger than the feminine gender.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... are stronger than women by birth, while the other part of the community differs ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27607361963 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02410430045 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564417177914 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.6357237695 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.333333333 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166570776234 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545478119291 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378600776738 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100284249011 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331519390322 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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