Some people say that men are naturally more competitive than women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a controversial perspective heating a debate over the natural character of males and females. While some people claim that men are more aggressive than women to some extent, I personally consider myself as an opponent of this notion. This essay will discuss why everyone should be treated equally.
On the one hand, many individuals claim that men are superior to women for some principle reasons. In the first place, competition is the instinct of men. Some people believe that men are natural-borned for making decisions and their wives should spend most time on doing domestic tasks. Due to the past prejudice, women couldn’t hold prominent positions since they are often adversely affected from external elements in competition. Moreover, males are undoubtedly stronger than their female counterparts in physical health. For example, in many sports which require stamina and endurance, like football and boxing, men frequently get priority and appreciation.
On the other hand, there are several explanations for why that gender should be respected equally in contemporary society. First of all, equality is the premise of a happy family. Since the women contribute to the family through household chores including preparing meals, taking care of children, they could participate in important decisions as a result. Apart from that, many current women hold high positions in companies and political governments. For instance, Angela Merkel was the first female Chancellor for Germany. She constantly held this position over three years and brought lots of achievements for the nation. She has been an incentive for thousands of women around the world to pursue their goal.
In conclusion, not only disagreement with the notion, I also believe that every person regardless of gender, deserved to be treated equally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, so, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43706293706 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81971058155 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629370629371 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0088529081 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4705882353 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8235294118 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23529411765 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206008848157 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597283843111 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808879713769 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119034222667 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101532235169 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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