Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with.
Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion.
People who try to use already tested ways are usually more careful in their routine life. They have a point of view that life is too important to risk for something that has not been tested before. Similarly, they think that to visit a new place during vacation is not a good idea, because you may end up not liking the place and that will waste your vacations. Moreover, they believe that opting for the track that was not travelled before may bring an unpleasent event.
On the contrary, there are several people who tend to try innovative ideas. These kind of people are usually more optimistic in their lives and tend to deliver positive vibes. Though trying new things may turn out to be a bad experience, it will still be a good learning. This group of people have a believe that we get the life once and we should get the max out of it. So, we should try different things and lead way for others to follow. Furthermore, it is argued by these kind of people that exploring new places bring sense of achievement which is an important element to keep ourselves motivated.
In my opinion, our world needs both kinds of people to maintain a sound balance in the activities perfomed around the globe. There are several jobs that require people who prefer to work on repetitive tasks. However, I believe that world has grown because of people who tend to risk for trying innovative ideas. We have found several beautiful valleys and discovered continents because of this tendency to go for something new. Similarly, technology has brought a revolution in our way of living and this is all because of executing innovation ideas.
In the conclusion, I would argue that world consists of people who prefer going for innovative ideas, and the people who will try to limit themselves with tested stuff to minimize the risk. I believe both types of people are essential to maintain the healthy balance of activities in the world. However, I am certain that leaders in every field are those who opt for taking risk of trying something different and innovative.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
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...ood learning. This group of people have a believe that we get the life once and we should...
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Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...d learning. This group of people have a believe that we get the life once and we should...
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...to follow. Furthermore, it is argued by these kind of people that exploring new places bri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, still, kind of, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71468144044 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47108802787 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498614958449 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6747674486 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5555555556 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0555555556 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292725644771 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908260855021 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437597466183 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176898335019 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337043658827 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.