Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them
There is a common belief in parenting that it is bad for children to play video games because it is just a waste of time. I do, however, not believe it. There are lots of examples in the media, talking about how kids are obsessed with games and did not do anything else other than that. I think this is just a time-management problem, if students can manage their time playing games properly then it is not a too bad thing for them. That considered two main reasons, one is that it helps students improve their intelligence and another is that it is a good way for kids to relax. So, I think kids should be allowed to play video games in a reasonable time.
Playing video games is not just a waste of time, but also helps kids to improve intelligence when they are playing. There are some games, built to help kids to know the world, improve their skills while playing or have some knowledge that might be beneficial to the kids. Playing games is not just a way of waste time but it can be also a way to learn in a fun way. Sometimes it is much easier and interesting to learn from the games rather than just reading or in a class. What is more, there are always some problems when they are playing. And it is a start for them to practice problem-solving skills, which is really important for them in the future. Thus, from my perspective, games can be another way to practice and learn new skills, not only just a waste of time.
Apart from that, it is a relax for kids while they are playing video games. Now some parents in high pressure tend to send their kids to many extra-curricular classes since they are three years old. Children now have much less free time than ever before, so they need a way to relax and just enjoy the time. There is also the social benefit for kids to play games. So that they could easily to find something to share with other kids if they play the same games and it is much easier for them to fit in the social circle. Because of those, I believe games can be a good way for kids to relax nowadays.
In a world, I don’t think kids should be not allowed to play games at all considering the benefits of games, which are other ways of learning and relaxing. Plus, they also have some social benefit. so, it is good for kids if they can play the games in a reasonable time.
Apart from that, it is a relax for kids while they are playing video games. Now some parents in high pressure tend to send their kids to many extra-curricular classes since they are three years old. Children now has much less free time than ever before, so they need a way to relax and just enjoy the time. There is also social benefit for kids to play games. So that they could easily to find something to share with other kids if they play the same games and it is much easier for them to fit in the social circle. Because of those, I believe games can be a good way for kids to relax nowadays.
In a world, I don’t think kids should be not allowed to play games at all considering the benefits of games, which are other ways of learning and relaxing. Plus, they also have some social benefit. so, it is good for kids if they can play the games in a reasonable time.
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- Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them 60
- It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects to specialize in one specific subject. 60
- the extended family is now less important than it was in the past. 70
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... time but it can be also a way to learn in a fun way. Sometimes it is much easier and intere...
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...aste of time. Apart from that, it is a relax for kids while they are playing video g...
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...easonable time. Apart from that, it is a relax for kids while they are playing video g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, then, thus, while, apart from, i think, talking about, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 42.0 15.1003584229 278% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2594.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 608.0 407.700716846 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26644736842 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9656475924 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26521288281 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.287828947368 0.524837075471 55% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 813.6 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2527875379 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6774193548 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6129032258 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.32258064516 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 11.8709677419 211% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339372820272 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124671576749 0.076458572812 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10485687191 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255582089507 0.150856017488 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607567605681 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.93 8.01818996416 74% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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