Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is a debate about whether the information provided online is valuable and reliable. In my opinion, it is a huge benefit for people because of a large amount of information available on the internet, though there might be some problems when accessing it. However, it can be solved by choosing the right and useful information.
Media technology is changing the communication models of news and information, from paper to digital age. Nowadays, the speed of information dissemination has been incredibly increased when comparing it in the past. It is because that everyone can be a disseminator when there is something happened. On top of that, it significantly decreased the limitation of distance. It is possible for people to know what is happening in another part of the world. So if there is something emergency, such as an earthquake, flourish, people could be able to get help as soon as possible. So I think the information on the internet is valuable because its timeliness and transmissibility.
There are some valuable contents or websites available online, for example, online courses and virtual communities, which are diamonds in the ocean of the internet. The online courses decrease the costs of learning new knowledge, provide another way of mastering a skill. It provides a possibility to a new field and has classes without going to classes. What is more, it is much easier to get help online when meeting some problems. The success of the virtual community is an obvious evidence of how people are relying on the internet. A programmer will not be survived without stack overflow or GitHub. Because information updates too fast, people are required to learn with the development of society and technology. However, it is impossible to learn everything in class. So the information online is vital to modern people.
In a world, information online is valuable and important to everyone when considering the timeliness of news and learning new knowledge online.
- It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects to specialize in one specific subject. 60
- It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects to specialize in one specific subject. 60
- the extended family is now less important than it was in the past. 70
- Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them 60
- Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for example, i think, such as, in my opinion, what is more, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15740740741 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06753947491 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524691358025 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7765243537 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.55 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212531913795 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058060698553 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045769072312 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125396663117 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524464020345 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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