the continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. what are the causes of this continued rise ? do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?
The advancing growth in the world's population is a tremendous problem facing to the human beings in present scenario . This hike in growth has brought a huge amount of problems to the humanity . I personally agree to this point that , growth has its negative effects too .
Growing population is a major problem in most of the developed countries in the world . With huge number of people there comes huge problems to fulfil the demands and need for the survival. Firstly, if the growth continued to rise we may fall in short of water and food as cultivating large amount would not be possible and we also destruct the environment as we are developing our homes in the interior of the forest. Furthermore, with more number of people we would need more resources. To stop this growth, particularly in India and China the government should take immediate steps to control the birth rate per family.
Secondly, people in India think that the more number of people the more you earn and according, to some religious beliefs stopping the birth is a sin so it is obvious that, a true believer will do it to improve his points. In addition to it, people in India think that it is good to have as many children as possible. Moreover, due to the advancement in science we have new equipment's to save life for instance, pace maker which helps in improving the heart rate and heart transplant surgeries which is most common in the developed countries has lowered the death rate and due to awareness people are more cautious about their health.
To recapitulate, I totally agree that the increase in population is a problem which we are facing and will continue to face if immediate measures are not taken to prevent it.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in short']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239130434783 0.247107183377 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.158385093168 0.155533422707 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0993788819876 0.0946595960268 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0465838509317 0.0501214627716 93% => OK
Pronouns: 0.055900621118 0.0437548338989 128% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121118012422 0.122226691241 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0341614906832 0.0403226058552 85% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61209066827 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0527950310559 0.0326793684256 162% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0993788819876 0.0861772015684 115% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0186335403727 0.021408717616 87% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00931677018634 0.011925033212 78% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1719.0 1933.35771543 89% => OK
No of words: 304.0 316.048096192 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65460526316 6.12580529183 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.309210526316 0.374742101984 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.236842105263 0.28420135186 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.167763157895 0.203846283523 82% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.111842105263 0.137316102897 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61209066827 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.037074148 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523026315789 0.56093040696 93% => OK
Word variations: 53.2366482196 60.7387585426 88% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 25.3333333333 20.7743622355 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.7657452759 49.517814964 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.25 127.492653851 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7743622355 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.08333333333 0.814263465372 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.99599198397 200% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 49.0175438596 49.1944974215 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.5119047619 1.69124875643 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426591527945 0.332605444948 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.143731163431 0.102741220458 140% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0870837648501 0.0668466124924 130% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.628049961928 0.534860350844 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.169822387047 0.148594505496 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.211116598901 0.134430193775 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117612308988 0.0742795772207 158% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.43690237975 0.324371583561 135% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.049415819111 0.0638462369009 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306005849116 0.228012699653 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699194286979 0.058150111329 120% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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