Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Scandals are immoral, illegal and shocking behavior of people that are far from the normal, expected from being part of a society. People often raise eyebrows as the actions by the doer is questionable in the society. It's in the human nature to be attracted to scandals and to gossip. We tend to, more often than not, talk and discuss about such matter at great lengths, thus drawing attention to it. As it is the center of discussion of the public, the issue is magnified exponentially.
No individual is perfect.
Each is flawed with tendency to make mistakes from time to time.Though some mistakes are inconsequential and reversible, others have a deep and larger impact on others and often can't be undone. Scandals come under the category of a mistake which has irreversible consequences and has been caught. Though every person has a choice to go down the right path, many times they are blinded by the attraction of the immoral path.
Scandals do bring to light the problems faced but often they are exaggerated, to satiate to the desires of the public for gossip. Many a times media creates mountains over mole holes to create sensational headlines. Moreover scandals often have a life of a moth. It can only survive until its fed with light, attention in this case.
The moment the light diminishes, so does the life expectancy. Although they do help to draw our attention towards the problems even for a fleeting moment, it doesn't provide with any solutions.Thus I don't agree with the author that scandals are a useful means and ways to bring attention to problems.There are far more effective, legal ways to bring forward the problems instead which can actually help to create the right channels to bring out the reforms.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
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Suggestion: Though
...ency to make mistakes from time to time.Though some mistakes are inconsequential and r...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...p and larger impact on others and often cant be undone. Scandals come under the cate...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... holes to create sensational headlines. Moreover scandals often have a life of a moth. I...
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...problems even for a fleeting moment, it doesnt provide with any solutions.Thus I dont ...
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Suggestion: Thus
...t, it doesnt provide with any solutions.Thus I dont agree with the author that scand...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...t, it doesnt provide with any solutions.Thus I dont agree with the author that scand...
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Suggestion: There
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'thus']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221538461538 0.240241500013 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.172307692308 0.157235817809 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0892307692308 0.0880659088768 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0584615384615 0.0497285424764 118% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0369230769231 0.0444667217837 83% => OK
Prepositions: 0.107692307692 0.12292977631 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0307692307692 0.0406280797675 76% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.71557536374 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0553846153846 0.030933414821 179% => OK
Particles: 0.00923076923077 0.0016655270985 554% => OK
Determiners: 0.116923076923 0.0997080785238 117% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00615384615385 0.0249443105267 25% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00923076923077 0.0148568991511 62% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1744.0 2732.02544248 64% => OK
No of words: 297.0 452.878318584 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87205387205 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.58838876751 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.323232323232 0.366273622748 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.252525252525 0.280924506359 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.178451178451 0.200843997647 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0841750841751 0.132149295362 64% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71557536374 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 219.290929204 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579124579125 0.48968727796 118% => OK
Word variations: 62.1522712826 55.4138127331 112% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6194690265 73% => OK
Sentence length: 19.8 23.380412469 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.982013623 59.4972553346 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.266666667 141.124799967 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 23.380412469 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.674092028746 59% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.21349557522 173% => OK
Readability: 45.0525252525 51.4728631049 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.34482758621 1.64882698954 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130709010202 0.391690518653 33% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.100703346672 0.123202303941 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0697194919959 0.077325440228 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.543886373048 0.547984918172 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.195169383399 0.149214159877 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495339733177 0.161403998019 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424760902327 0.0892212321368 48% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.192522847037 0.385218514788 50% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.164304365557 0.0692045440612 237% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866215653823 0.275328986314 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312376144797 0.0653680567796 48% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.4325221239 38% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.30420353982 132% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 7.22455752212 42% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 13.5995575221 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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