You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter
1. Explain your situation
2. Describe your problems
3. Tell him/her when you think you can start
Dear Mr. Perera,
I regret to inform you that I will not be able to assume my job at your esteemed organization on the 1st February 2017 as per the appointment letter.
This is because, i need to travel to Peradeniya on the 28th January 2017 for my masters graduation which is to be held on the 1st February 2017. I was not aware of this when I accepted your appointment letter as I received the invitation yesterday.
Attending this graduation is very important for me since i have got through the course with a merit pass and the University of Peradeniya has organized a stage recognition for me with a gold medal at the ceremony.
Therefore, please be kind enough to understand my situation and grant me permission to attend the graduation. In addition, I confirm that I will be able to to start work at your organization from the 3rd February 2017. I apologize for the inconveniences caused.
Thank you.
Yours truly,
Vaishnavi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...appointment letter. This is because, i need to travel to Peradeniya on the 28t...
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Line 9, column 154, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...addition, I confirm that I will be able to to start work at your organization from th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79393939394 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94101173849 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.8141591936 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.875 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215298835643 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109084506236 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964093800606 0.0603063233224 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114798071747 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876787242836 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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