Some people prefer to spend their holidays in resorts where everything is organized for them and they take little interest in the country they are visiting. Others prefer to travel around the country and to see how the people live, to get to know their customs and traditions and cuisine. Write an essay on which type of foreign travel you think is best for both the tourist and the local community.
some people think to spend their holidays so good, it is better to be in a fun place or country, while in return, some people have an opposite view and like to learn about the history and customs of a country. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss both sides.
To begin with, nowadays, most people like pleasure trips and they always would spend their holidays in the fun places. Because of this wave of interested people, many countries based their tourism industries on the fun places. For example, in Turkey, the beaches of Antalya and Pattaya designed for fun, happiness and even dancing. Although this type of travels is beneficial for moral, I do not like to spend every holiday in fun time.
On the other hand, some people go to the countries with a long history and rich culture. For this kind of tourists, there are the countries such as Italy and Egypt with historical places managed their tourism industries to attract them. For instance, my advice for this people is Iran with many ancient places, variant nations with rich cultures and many delicious foods.
In conclusion, while foreign travel for fun and pleasure have many advantages, traveling to renown customs and traditions of countries is remarkable as well, and I suggest, study about its safety and facilities, before traveling to a country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1100.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84581497797 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43830907833 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563876651982 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9631003624 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9 7.25397266985 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262703907446 0.242375264174 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108881913285 0.0925447433944 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050077097714 0.071462118173 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155852355258 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390230529126 0.0609392437508 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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