Some people think that not all criminals should be kept in prison. Some criminals should be do unpaid work to help other people in the community. Does u agree or disagree?
Nowadays, crime rates are abruptly increasing in every country which has detritus effects on people and society. Presently, few masses ponder that offenders should be punished by sending them to jails. However, others assert that doing unsalaried work in the community would be more beneficial for the people and society. Here, I would like to accord with given statement.
To begin with, participating in unpaid work in the local community would be appositive scheme. To embark, a salient example of this is USA that could decrease the crime statistics up to 30% by educate criminals and teaching them vocational training which lead to better job opportunities for the criminals. Hence, voluntary services play a paramount role to mend criminals to become good ones.
Furthermore, most of the offenders re offend after releasing from prison into society and they usually break the law in order to making a living since they have no experience at works. Finally, rehabilitation programs would lucrative for society as well as criminals.
On the contrary, imprisonment policy would act as a deterrent to tackle the problem of up surging crime rates. To illustrate, stern punishment in jails not only restrict them to do crime but also to aware them of severe consequences so they would not offend it again. Thence, it is the best solution to uphold an ordered society.
To recapitulate, while long term punishment could lessen the crime rates in some ways but there are a variety of certain methods that could aid even better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ld like to accord with given statement. To begin with, participating in unpaid w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, hence, however, so, then, well, while, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13545816733 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76933987538 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653386454183 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0893138598 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1538461538 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160456522145 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509076558411 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058196337077 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749887467777 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690055177531 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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