Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.
There is no doubt that in 21's century, there is no one which doesn't know the importance of the knowledge of the society. Despite the importance of it, it would help individuals to attain a power in which others would respect them because of their social place. One of these social places is the role of the teacher in the society. During the time between the past till now, their place has been remarkably diminished in society. I definitely believe that this is a reality in which has been occurred in-universe. There are a couple of reasons for this approach that will be discussed in the lines below.
As the level of education in graduate studies has been increased during the past decades, the number of educated individuals increased subsequently and teachers are not the pick of the most educated individuals like several years ago. So because people instinctively more respect to the individuals with higher academic education, and most of the teachers have B.Sc. degree, people do not say them as a pioneer of educated people in the society.
Nowadays, people admire the individuals with more rate of income, and as the average salary of the society of teachers is relatively low, they are not applying to the reach level of their society. Unfortunately, this unwritten law is promoted in most of the societies from when the societies change their major approach to the economic issues. Although this kind of insight has been existed from earlier, it amplified during the recent years.
As the increasing the worth of knowledge and education in most of the countries, not only the number of educated individuals like the teachers have been increased, but also some of them are unemployed nowadays. It will clearly inspire a signal to whole or the people that the individuals with lower levels of education are not as fruitful as the past for the society, so their attitude will be changed into a negative toward them.
To recapitulate, all the reasons presented above bring us to the conclusion that the place of the teachers has been diminished during the past decades. This is due to the reasons given, which are increasing the level of education in most of the societies, changing the values between people of the most countries from education to the economic issues, and unemployment of several educated individuals in some countries. A number of reasons were mentioned in this essay and yet it could be observed that probably many more reasons might exist that still supports diminishing of the teachers’ place in societies.
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also, but, if, so, still, kind of, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2122.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95794392523 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74039027181 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43691588785 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 680.4 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.7322149263 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.625 100.406767564 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6875 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131741101741 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452870394613 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463171284944 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800780634236 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036452333743 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.