Nowadays many young people leave home at an early age to either study or work in another city.'Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages for young people? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience.
In this day and age, the phenomenon of leaning house for achieving experience in early age and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that being with family is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that experiences which achieve individually can be a plus, and I will analyze throughout this essay.
From the social standpoint, facing with problems individually can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that increasing the chance of finding job opportunities, as well as casual works, are inextricably bound up. For instance, one of my family members moved to another city for his university time, and he found an excellent job in there. Therefore it is quite clear that leaving home in early ages can be a plus.
Moreover, fundamental aspects of influences gain by leaving family related to this reality that the demerits of becoming more confidence pertain to leaving by themselves. Based on a recent study conducted by Tehran Univesity in 2008 more than 80% of early leaver become stronger in their future life. Hence it is obvious that this kind of life can be helpful for people.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of leaving home for education or work far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of leaving alone prove the significance of better life, but also pinpoint higher achievement implications.
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18146718147 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93183186918 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 139.433497537 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667953667954 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6721193972 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184002825162 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656661816756 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0254839036054 0.071462118173 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103004207578 0.151781067708 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.011112759715 0.0609392437508 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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