The tendency for human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashions in clothes and other consumers goods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the era of globalization , following celebrities blindly or other influential persons is on rise. Now a days, people are more inclined towards imitation in form of latest fashion specially clothing and other daily use products. I completely agree with this idea and believe that society is more conscious for futile show off instead of good moral character .
Emergence of technology has contributed a lot to promote different ideologies in life style. Common man has easy accessibility for every new brand with all its features in hand. For example, online shopping on Flipkart, Amazon, ebay etc. offers variety of fashionable products with the help of advertisements through well known public figures which attracts consumers to a great extent. In this way, people buy those goods which their favorite face prefer to wear or use.
Similarly ,rat race in modern life is another reason of copying behavior in world of new trends. No one choose to be inferior than their counterparts when it becomes the issue of their dresses, mobile phones ,cars ,watches and other accessories. In a survey done in 2009, 80% teenagers in London were found to wear leather jackets as it was the trend of glamour world at that time. So common masses rapidly acquire the upcoming vogue.
In conclusion, though the homo -sapiens has the likelihood to adapt popular mode of attire and other routine appliances by facsimileing others, in my opinion more stress should be laid on construction of good moral behavior instead of outer appearances.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77067970664 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.716 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5026802265 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8461538462 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167333165106 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044013486805 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340904328437 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840493082323 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166070939091 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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