Prison is the only truly effective form of punishment, because it separates criminals
from society.
Prison from several years ago until now is known as a practice of punishment for delinquents and wrong-doer and it is seen in history of all nations. However, whether it is the mere way of reform to criminal or not is always a topical question. I personally believe prison could not be the only way which could punish people and making people separated from society is not a wise way. So I am going to delve deeply into this issue in this essay.
On the one hand, imprisonment would definitely result in numerous detrimental effects on people in long-term. Sometimes people are forced to spend a quarter or half of their life-time in prison for some issues which could be compensated by being presence in society. According to the latest survey in Iran sixty percent of prisoners are sentenced because of financial problems, although making them separated from society is an appropriate resolution for it. As long as people are in society they could work and strive for putting money aside in order to pay off their debt, of course this possibility could be met only by guidance and in-depth supervision of adept consultant.
On the contrary, some criminals that could be against safety and security of society ought to be imprisoned because Presence of these delinquents threatens life and properties of people constantly. Accordingly, the head of drug distributor those who plan and implement terrorist attack in countries should be faced with most severe sentences such as life imprisonment. Plus, For instance, someone in society commits crimes in line with benefits which result in a few casualties and sacrificing of innocent people. Reportedly, crimes such as murder or hostage taking are of kinds of delinquencies that could not be compensated. Nevertheless, In my point of view, there are a large number of crimes that does not need imprisonment.
To conclude, I think prison indeed is not only suitable way of punishment since it would contribute to huge negative effects on people who have committed small-scale and financial crimes. Conversely, criminals who are dangerous to communities should be kept in prison to have better society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 673, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...theless, In my point of view, there are a large number of crimes that does not need imprisonment....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, conversely, however, if, nevertheless, so, for instance, i think, of course, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07887323944 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88721263956 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560563380282 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5177613803 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.2 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136739015244 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444726578278 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450812979324 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934711285294 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507507885257 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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