Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic?
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
In current's challenging world, people love to explore untouched or challenging places for travel purpose. So these type of adventurous tours has plus as well as minus points too. This view mentions briefly hereunder.
Most mankind has a basis hobby is called travelling. People keen to travel different places like beaches, historical places, hills station in their leisure time. But nowadays, tourist want to go and enjoy at challenging places like the Sahara deserts and the Antarctic etc.
To explore, this type challenging places people can increase their confidence level as well as health due to basic guidelines published by authority. Additionally, it's obvious that it's a lifetime achievement feeling for them. Moreover, it also creates the motivational story for rest of the population. Untouched or difficult places' biggest difficulty is financial conditions. Inhabitants of these areas are facing challenges to survive, therefore if tourist travel there then the economy can increase in these areas. And local people can live the good life. Last but not the least, the world can know the tradition, the culture of the inhabitant of these areas.
Against the benefits, it has too many disadvantages too. Likewise, pollution can increase in this beautiful, natural places. The study shows that pollution is increased by 20% in last ten years in the Antartic. In other words, the climate is going to disturb reason of pollution. Furthermore, figures also say that tourist death is also increased in the adventurous places due to lack of safety measures.
Finally, difficult places have tremendous God's beauty with physical challenges. So people are attracted to it and explore the places.
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- Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic?What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...thority. Additionally, its obvious that its a lifetime achievement feeling for them...
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Line 5, column 327, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'places the biggest'.
Suggestion: places the biggest
... the population. Untouched or difficult places biggest difficulty is financial conditions. Inh...
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Line 5, column 427, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'surviving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: surviving
...ts of these areas are facing challenges to survive, therefore if tourist travel there then...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, finally, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, as to, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38432835821 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82317240102 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600746268657 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7900552127 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.15 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153427188983 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414330445462 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535876370975 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866434614148 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353501491988 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.33 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.