Whether parents should be held legally be responsible for children.
Parents should be held legally responsible for their children's act was always a debatable topic. Many people believe that children learn things observing from their parents and they should be punished. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the statement they absorb and imitate what they observe from their parents. This essay would further analyze how parents are legally bound for kids acts with justifying reasons and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To begin with, sometimes kids behave in an unacceptable manner which is not taught by parents. This situation leads to moot question that "who is responsible?". It is said that children are like a sponge, they absorb and imitate same like their parents. For example, in developing stage, a child learns language, culture, tradition and manner by observing his parents. So, if parents speak in abusive way, it is most likely that child will observe and imitate same thing. This example clearly shows that parents are responsible for kid's abusive language.
Moreover, it's parents duty to teach children social behavior and discipline. Say, for instance, if a kid goes to neighborhood house and brings couple of toys he liked, it's parents responsibility to discipline him and teach him not to take anyone's anything without permission. This clearly exemplifies us that there is an obvious link between parent's teaching and children's acts. Thus, parents must be legally liable their children's act.
These analysis proves that kids act in a way they are brought up by their parents and based on the things they are exposed to. In a nutshell, parents are solely responsible for kid's acts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 20.9802955665 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19776119403 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69972678749 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574626865672 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 4.6157635468 238% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9345349709 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0625 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355840280767 0.242375264174 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131967740454 0.0925447433944 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141568127688 0.071462118173 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218244169468 0.151781067708 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106856376219 0.0609392437508 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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