Some People Think It Is Acceptable To Use Animals For The Benefit Of Humans. Other People Think It Is Wrong To Exploit Animals For Human Purposes. What Is Your Opinion?
In the present age, whether animals should be exploited for human benefit has sparked much debate. Some people assert that it is acceptable. Whereas, others argue that it is unacceptable. I agree with the former view.
Increasing human population and growing life expectancy has led to demand for new vaccines and drugs. For developement of these vaccines, research is conducted on animals. It has been scientifically proven that the DNA structure of some animals is very similar to that of humans, making them the perfect sample for experiments and trials. Furthermore, the survival of humans on earth is given the highest priority. Hence, sacrificing of few animals, who are available in abundance will not affect the ecological balance. Therefore, it is considered acceptable to use animals for development of medical science and ensure survival of human race in the long run.
On the other hand, it has been observed and proved that multinational corporations in the name of medical research expliot animals for cosmetic research and trade of fur. Firstly, secret filming by animal activist have repeatedly proved that animals are tortured and ill treated for benefit of clothing corporations. Secondly, due to growing demand for afforadable beauty products, animals are kept in captivity to test these products on them. Hence, it can be said that animals are exploited for benefit of cosmetic and clothing corporations.Therefore, making it unacceptable.
In my opinion, use of animals for development of new drugs and vaccines is acceptable as it will ensure survival of human race. But, torturing and ill treating animals for monetary benefit is not acceptable under any circumstances.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...me people assert that it is acceptable. Whereas, others argue that it is unacceptable. ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37078651685 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11373163012 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546816479401 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8523726179 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.625 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412695491423 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127840611771 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764190612232 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261340863168 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252212907685 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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