The time people devote in job leaves very little time for personal life. How widespread is the problem. What problem will this shortage of time causes.
In changed scenario every person is busy in their task to fulfill their necessities of daily living. In past time, life of individual is not so hectic and gives full time to their own life as compared to today. There are lots of reasons of this issue that I will discuss in upcoming paragraphs.
Highlighting my view, first cause is that nowadays people are very selfish and greedy so they want to earn more money to live a luxurious and high standard life. Further, this thing forces them to join a high paid job and ultimately high paid job demand for more working hours. They work for longer period of time due to which they cannot give proper time to family and personal work and this factor leads to family disputes and disturbance.
Another conducive idea striking in my mind is that nowadays emotional bonding between family members are decreasing I think that this is due which person mostly like to spend time outside with their friends at working places. All the above, the another relevant point is that individual want to get name and fame in society so that they can more reputation and I ponder that it is also main reason for their more involvement in their work.
Summarize whole content, I reiterate my opinion that due to a plethora of reason I discussed above are factor behind spending less time for personal life which will create lots of problem in future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...l their necessities of daily living. In past time, life of individual is not so hectic an...
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Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...f individual is not so hectic and gives full time to their own life as compared to today....
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Line 2, column 299, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ore working hours. They work for longer period of time due to which they cannot give proper ti...
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Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ey can more reputation and I ponder that it is also main reason for their more in...
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Line 4, column 173, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of problems'.
Suggestion: lots of problems
...ime for personal life which will create lots of problem in future.
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Line 4, column 189, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... life which will create lots of problem in future.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... will create lots of problem in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67213114754 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33141613818 2.71678728327 86% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.6364561364 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.666666667 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1111111111 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 7.25397266985 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267859635784 0.242375264174 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109194205491 0.0925447433944 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732245998212 0.071462118173 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168581606351 0.151781067708 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529062161642 0.0609392437508 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.1260098522 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.9458128079 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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