Do you think extreme sports like skiing, water rafting etc. are dangerous and should be prohibited?
There are many sporting activities one can engage in, but the question is what are the benefits and danger of such sports. Many people have proposed that extreme sports such as skiing and water rafting should be banned because of the risks associated with them. In my opinion such sports should not be allowed to go on in this present day society because of the inherent danger to health associated with them. And also they promote violence in the society especially among children.
One of the disadvantages of the sports such as skiing is that there is lot of risk of falling from a height owing to the height at which this sport is practiced. News has shown several accidents as result of this sport; sometime it has led to fatality or even death. Sport or excise should be to the benefit of the human health and not detrimental to ones’ health. For instance, my friend Jim, who used to represent my community in this sport competition, is no longer active today because of the injury he sustained during this activity.
Furthermore, skiing and water rafting promotes violence among children. Children are easily influenced by what they see or watch. They tend to demonstrate these sports in their daily lives after watching them and as such become violent in their behaviour with the mindset that this is a normal life. For example, my uncle's son Uche who used to watch wrestling programm always uses his younger sister to demonstrate what he saw in the sport. Prohibiting these sports will save the society from a lot of troubles.
In conclusion, although some people enjoy extreme sports, I strongly believe that they should be banned because they are great danger to our health and also they have contributed negatively to children's violent attitude.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 20.9802955665 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 301.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89368770764 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51835131671 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544850498339 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1293655641 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.214285714 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207814434329 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773464248335 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062386278983 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129707027029 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490844989877 0.0609392437508 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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