Some people think law changes human behavior. Do you agree or disagree?
These days , there is ongoing debate between people that human behavior is affected by law . Some people seem to be either passionate supporters or some seem to be opponents . They may have theoretical or empirical agreements and disagreements ; my view is that advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
There are several reason why laws affects human behavior ? One of them is that every human brain`s has different tendency to think and learn . The origin of laws from ancient times to today`s with their prospective is that to control the crime ratio in society ; However , laws or rules may be vary from one country to another . Lets take an comparison example of middle east with India , moreover , type of governments are different from each other . Furthermore , In middle east, there is a provision of death penalty for rape and murder crimes . while in India , due to more complex judicial system , penalty process will take years . As a result , the crime ratio least and high in both regions respectively .
Furthermore , crime and strong laws are opponent to each other . In other words , the countries with strict rules against crimes , the rate of murder, robbery and rape is low as compare to countries with flexible rules . To add up , human tendency to do crime is decreased with strict laws .
In my words , human behavior is directly affected by strong laws and rules .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0704845815 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74359622784 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577092511013 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8651812276 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2142857143 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2142857143 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.33497536946 581% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215010739283 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821873374051 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850816494231 0.071462118173 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145026305499 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476684647282 0.0609392437508 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.