With technology speeding up, more and more young people begin to use mobile phones and the internet, but old people have little chance to be exposed to them. ?What ways could mobile phone and internet be useful to old people? How can old people be encouraged to use this new technology?
The importance of mobile phones is growing day by day which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of internet has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this on old people over the years. It can be agreed that mobile phones and internet are also useful to old people. This essay will elaborate how mobile phones and internet are useful to older people. Thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons of mobile phones and internet is beneficial to the older people today, but the most conspicuous that lies in the fact that with the use of mobile phones they can easily interact with their nears and dears. Secondly, they can easily get to know about what is happening in the world with the help of internet. Another key justification for upholding this nation that older people can search anything on web related to their health.
On the other hand, it is duty of younger people to help older people to use mobile phones and also give them some emergency numbers such as police station or ambulance. They can help them out to download some applications related to religion. Also there are some more features in mobile which can easily to understand for older people.
From what has been discussed above it can be concluded that the impact of mobile phones and internet is prominent. But still I believe that young people have to motivate elder people to use of this mobile phone which was invented for both older and younger people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 413, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...nd internet are useful to older people. Thus will lead to a logical conclusion. ...
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Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... some applications related to religion. Also there are some more features in mobile ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82196969697 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42134948126 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492424242424 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7089755328 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9230769231 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.458006805564 0.242375264174 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165708344687 0.0925447433944 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106949449725 0.071462118173 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295885492396 0.151781067708 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071040082187 0.0609392437508 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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