Any recent inventions that you think proved beneficial or detrimental to society.
Science has revolutionized each and every field by its inventions. Now almost everyday new technology comes in front of us and gradually we have become dependent on these inventions. Recently various prolific inventions have been done; one of them is the smartphone. In this essay, I will explain the advantages and disadvantages of the smartphone.
At the outset, the said small box has changed everybody's life to make it more easy and comfortable. Smartphone has the ability to install various useful applications in it like video calling, booking cab or restaurant, call recording, banking services apps etc. Thus, it has fortified people's life in enormous ways. With the help of the smartphone, everybody posses rich information about the development, changes, revolutionary events happening across the globe.
On the flipside, the smartphone has myriad advantages but also it has numerous disadvantages too. People have become so much dependent on this device hence the formal traditional way of communications like writing a letter, face to face conversation has been almost diminished from the world. Also due to easy and handy access of social media apps like Facebook and Instagram people have started ignoring health issues. For Example, If a person having youtube, Facebook handy on his or her phone which is the prime source of distraction can further lead dealy in routine tasks or activities or make them less socialize.
To conclude, Albeit, Smartphone has few problems but its benefits outweigh its disadvantages. Ergo, It is beneficial to use this gadget with extra care to avoid its adverse effect on health.
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- Any recent inventions that you think proved beneficial or detrimental to society. 11
- people emphasizing government to build an advanced transport system rather new roads for vehicles that are overcrowding the cities. Do you agree or disagree? 77
- Some people think placing advertisements in schools is a great resource for public schools that need additionally funding, but others think it exploits children by treating them as a captive audience for corporate sponsors.Choose which position you most 85
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... been almost diminished from the world. Also due to easy and handy access of social ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, thus, as for, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30115830116 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98844691853 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 139.433497537 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656370656371 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4313908859 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0714285714 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 7.25397266985 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0325514608885 0.242375264174 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0120164133025 0.0925447433944 13% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322751960904 0.071462118173 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0216065912101 0.151781067708 14% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228936815258 0.0609392437508 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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