Discuss the role of native place behind successful person.
In modern era, success is pivotal for survival to lead others and it is depend upon individual who they can achieve success. There are some people said that native place plays imperative contribution for achievement of success, but there is a plethora of other things which affects it. I will discuss in forthcoming paragraphs.
To embark with, there are myriad of things, which strongly affect the success. The first and foremost is masses own ability, determination, and not only strength but also motivation. These all combine to provide a pathway to them so they can achieve goal with manner. Furthermore, migration also unable person to face difficulties individually without any help. For instance, when person move from ane place to another he or she get exposed to various circumstances, which develop ability to tackle with each aspect.
Further reinforcing my views, I deem that confidence and encouragement are also seems to be important as without these public cannot fix their goal. Namely, who are not bold enough to take decision about their own life remain always recessive and lack of facilities. Lastly, mainly encouragement is given by parents without which person every time under estimate itself without taking any step to deal with issues of life and career.
To conclude, populace choose their way independently and effectively as they have number of capabilities which provide right guidance to them. So, there is need to judge their own strength to lead towards success in positive manner.
- some people give the opinion that working women do not pay attention to bring up children hence they should be discouraged from doing job what extent agree and disagree 76
- When celebrities endorse products and services, people usually feel attracted to these products. Does such attraction put more responsibility on the shoulders of these celebrities?Support your opinion with reasons and examples from your personal experienc 77
- means of communication changed from last 10 years . discuss it 85
- It is true that one day man would be surronded by nothing else but waste due to thoreway societies what are the causes acn be held responsible for this what should be that other consequences of this problem 65
- Many people think regions affect successful persons . what your's opinion about native regions and accomplished persons influence on the regions they belong to? 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 73, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...l for survival to lead others and it is depend upon individual who they can achieve su...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 430, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...ove from ane place to another he or she get exposed to various circumstances, which...
^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
... ability to tackle with each aspect. Further reinforcing my views, I deem that conf...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aspect. Further reinforcing my views, I deem that confidence and encouragement...
^^
Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'remain'.
Suggestion: always remain
...h to take decision about their own life remain always recessive and lack of facilities. Lastl...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, lastly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22857142857 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77069209655 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669387755102 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4006307248 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5384615385 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161762939614 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534751284534 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506571371492 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921179204552 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721318602032 0.0609392437508 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.