People today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes? What are the solutions?
In recent years, many people are suffered the sense of being insecure wherever they stay. There are a number of reasons behind this point of view and several solutions should be proposed to change these oppositional attitudes.
There are two primary reasons why people are often scared of the society. One reason is that people tend to suffer from social problems such as high crime rate. For example, in some cities in Viet Nam where tourism is developed, the rate of robbery increases since these places have numerous tourists. Another reason is the impact of different types of pollution such as air pollution, noise pollution. This cause will directly affect on people’s health.
However, measures must be taken by governments and authorities to change negative attitudes toward citizens. Firstly, governments should create more employment opportunities to reduce the problem of crime. Therefore, people will travel outside without feeling unsafe. Secondly, the executive branch should offer the public transport systems on the street and encourage them to use public transport instead of private vehicles.
In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the anxiety that individuals are facing to.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ise pollution. This cause will directly affect on people's health. However, meas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 189.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49206349206 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64672987408 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.708994708995 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0650914221 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0831382693957 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321658850381 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373336570867 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0424374787704 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284662878252 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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