The bar chart below shows the results of survey conducted by a personnel department at a major company. The survey was carried out on 2 groups of workers: those aged from 18-30 years and those aged 45-60, and shows factors affecting their work performance

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The bar chart below shows the results of survey conducted by a personnel department at a major company. The survey was carried out on 2 groups of workers: those aged from 18-30 years and those aged 45-60, and shows factors affecting their work performance.

The given horizontal chart depicts the information about the results of a survey, which is conducted among two groups of employees: aged between 18-30 years and 45-60 years and it reveals ten factors affecting their work performance. The data is calibrated in percentum.

It can be seen that the individulas who are aged between 18-30 years have maximum (over 80%) chances for personal development whereas, work environment is the least affected of this age group. In addition, work performance influenced by team spirit is equal (around 30%) of both the age groups. Moreover, the affect of job security on workers aged between 45-60 years are almost half than the other age group that is from 18-30 years.

As far as trend is concerned, the highest proportion of people aged from 45-60 years is affected by money. Further, promotion prospects affects the people aged between 18-30 years and 45-60 years are 80% and 50% respectively. Furthermore, the performance affected by working enviornment aged from 18-30 years is almost double than the other age group.

Overall, it is evident that the young workers are more affected by the given factors than the adult employees.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, moreover, so, whereas, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.140625 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63205380801 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552083333333 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1457348788 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.666666667 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398495632439 0.215688989381 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181041463519 0.103423049105 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104001792298 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243985073915 0.15604864568 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113279137555 0.0819641961636 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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